Jack and Jill - a nursery rhyme
Early Stage 1 and Stage 1 students at Penrith Public School learn about nursery rhymes in Term One. Each class looked at the rhyming words in Jack and Jill and came up with new rhyming pairs. Then we used the matrix to change the rhyme into a new version.
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Jack and
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Jill
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Went up the
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hill
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To fetch a pail of
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water.
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Jack fell
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down
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And broke his
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crown
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And Jill came tumbling
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after!
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Here is Mr McLean’s version:
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Jack and Jill
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Went down the
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mountain
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To fetch some water from the
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fountain.
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Jill fell down and hurt her
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knee
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And Jack said,
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"Gee!
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It’s usually
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me!"
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S1K (English)’s version:
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Jill and
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Jack
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Went out the
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back
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To try to find a
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pet.
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They saw a
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toad
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Out on the
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road.
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It was slippery and
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wet!
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K1FM's version:
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Jack and
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Jane
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Went in the
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rain
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To jump into a
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puddle.
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Jack fell
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down
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And broke his
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crown,
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So Jane gave him a
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cuddle.
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S1C (English)’s version:
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Jack and
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Will
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Went down a
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hill
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To have themselves a
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swim.
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Jack bobbed up and
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down
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And nearly
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drowned
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And Will had to rescue
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him.
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S1I (English)’s version:
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Jack and
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Dane
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Ran down the
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lane
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To find a big blue
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house.
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They had a
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shock
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And fell over a
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rock.
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There was a little
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mouse!
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S1S (English)’s version:
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Jack and
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Phil
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Were feeling
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ill
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Mother fetched some
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water.
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Mum fell
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down
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It made her
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frown.
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She was rescued by her
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daughter.
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SCH and SCLB’s version:
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Jack went fishing for a
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fish
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To put it on a little
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dish
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So that Jill could
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eat.
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Jack used his
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pail
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But caught a
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whale!
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And Jill said, "I like
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meat!"
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Click here for some new Wacky Wiki Rhymes by S1S English (2008)!
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